Mary Sue Test

Everyone is doing this, so why not me?

Character: Raven Blue Foxx

1. [ ] They are possessed by an angel. 
2. [X] They are possessed by a demon. Does a mental illness                   count? I think it does.
3. [ ] They are a werewolf/vampire/faerie.
4. [ ] They are physically strong. 
5. [X] They have a rare hair/fur/skin color. Droxen are creatures of their own kind. So...maybe?
6. [ ] Their eyes are an unusual color. 
7. [ ] This eye color happens to be red. Why red? Isn't purple everyone's favourite Mary Sue colour? No? Okay.
8. [X] Their eyes change color Don't make a Droxen angry...
9. [X] They have wings. I believe can fly. I got shot by the pizza guy.
10.[X] They can grow extra body parts/shapeshift. I'm worried now...
11.[ ] They are immortal. Whew! Something I can't answer!
Note: Droxen get to choose their genders at a certain age. Raven hasn't decided yet, so these next ones don't apply.

12.[ ] [If female.] They have large boobs.
13.[ ] [If male.] They are very muscular.
14.[ ] They are very attractive to the opposite gender. Hecky no.
15.[] They are pyrokinetic/etc. This has something to do with fire... Does breathing fire count? Not if you can't control it!!!
16.[ ] They have sixth sense/can mind-read/etc. I wish!
17.[ ] They have an object of some sort that gives them powers.
18.[ ] They have a special ability/power, but they don't know about it yet. Perhaps. Maybe. I don't know.
19.[ ] They were bestowed/cursed with these powers. Nope, just born with 'em.
20.[ ] They are a healer.
21.[ ] They are from a very rich/royal family.
22.[ ] They don't know that they are from a very rich/royal background.
23.[ ] They have lost one/both of their parents.
24.[ ] They ran away from home. I don't think being assigned a mission of leaving home counts...Does it?
25.[ ] Their parents are cruel, uncaring, abusive etc.
26.[ ] They witnessed one/both of their parent's death. 
27.[ ] They are part angel/demon/faerie/some other mythical creature. Not part. They're completely full bred Droxen!
29.[ ] They were abused/spoiled as a child.
30.[ ] They are very attractive to the same gender. Hahaha NOOO!
31.[X] They have lots of friends/no friends. Lonely... I'm so lonely...
32.[ ] They are emo.
33.[ ] They look much younger/older than they really are.
35.[ ] They have lots of morals and declare them a fair bit. 
I believe that mental and emotional disorders are a serious problem, and therefore, should not add points to a Mary Sue character. Any disorder should be added to remove points, as it is a challenge in their life.
36.[ ] They have a mental disorder. 
37.[ ] They have an emotional disorder. 
38.[ ] They struggle to stay sane. 
39.[ ] They are a psycho. 
40.[ ] They have multiple personalities. 
41.[X] They are very intelligent. The square root of 9 is 3.
42.[ ] They have hallucinations. Once again, this is a challenge, not a quality of a Mary Sue!
43.[ ] They can summon spirits/demons/angels etc. 
44.[ ] They have an unusual/unrealistic pet.
45.[ ] They have a guardian spirit.
46.[ ] They have a 'special type' of soul.
47.[ ] Their soul is not the same as them.
48.[ ] They can talk to spirits/ghosts. 
49.[X] Some part of their body glows. Turn around, bright eyes!!
50.[ ] They have a rare/unusual name. Raven. The rarest and most unusual name ever! 
51.[ ] They were born on an important date, such as New Year's Eve, etc. I think April 25th is a very important date? How about you?
52.[ ] They have a twin/sibling(s) that they were separated from at birth/a young age.
53.[X] They are connected with a certain element. Raven is an Air Element Droxen.
54.[ ] They are connected with a certain animal. 
55.[ ] They always dress like a certain 'label'. I don't think "naked animal with fur" is a label...
56.[ ] They look quite a bit like a character from a popular anime/manga. Dude, Droxen aren't even recognized as an official unofficial original species. Forget popular anime.
65.[ ] They are very mysterious/dark. Not exactly...
66.[ ] They are very lively/happy. Aww, man. That is too funny!
67.[ ] Their mood changes a lot/very quickly.
68.[ ] They are very patient. 
69.[ ] They are from a long line of assassins.
70.[ ] They have a piece of jewelry/clothing that they always wear.
71.[ ] They have amnesia. 
72.[ ] The have some sort of harmful curse upon them. 
73.[ ] They are involved in some sort of prophecy. 
74.[ ] They are 'the chosen one'. No, there are about four chosen ones every, like, 3 years or so.
75.[ ] They have insomnia.
Score: 9!?
Take points off your OC's overall score if they fit any of the following statements- 

1. [ ] They smoke. 
2. [ ] They are an alcoholic. 
3. [ ] They are overweight. 
4. [ ] They are addicted to drugs. 
5. [X] They have a short temper. Not that short, but still short.
6. [ ] They enjoy bullying others. 
7. [ ] They do not care much about others. 
8. [ ] They are relatively emotionless. 
9. [X] They have some sort of permanent medical condition. Let's see now, Depression, Social Anxiety Disorder, and Autism kinda fit in this description. Also, I can say whatever I want about Autism because I have it.
-1. 
Overall Score: 8!

 

Your point score:
5: Anti-Sue. Your character may be a bit on the boring side. Of course, this does depend, but generally if they score that low, it wouldn't hurt to 'spice them up' a bit. 

6-15: Balanced Character. If your OC scored around here, then they are probably quite a well-balanced and interesting character. Those scoring in the higher end of this category may be a bit too much though. 

16-25: Borderline Mary-Sue. We have a problem. You need to tone your character down. They are most likely a bit annoying to others, too.

26: Mary-Sue. Please revise your character... NOW. 

So, it appears I have a balanced character! I think it would be really cool to see do this test! What do you think? Well, Ravenhoof out!